May 27, 2010

My kids poetry!


The Poetry Foundation has a fun, quick podcast entitled 'How to Raise a Poetry Imp'. It is worth a listen.
Reading poetry to my kids is part of our regular life. I have written about my kids listening to poetry here and about their poetry writing here, and about introducing kids to the arts, including poetry here.

I highly recommend you read some poetry to your kids. 'Poetry Speaks to Children' is THE best book to begin with. My kids ages 4  to almost 10 all love it! We also enjoyed a Robert Louis Stevenson coloring book this year.

We are just finishing our school year. I have been typing up all the kid's poems, between them there were almost 40 finished poems!

Our poetry class consisted of either reading/listening to a 'real' poem and discuss it or using  fine art painting as a prompt and then each of my kids would write a poem on a similar topic. It was fun to see the differences in their ages in how they wrote:


Laura, 6 has written 'poems' that are mainly train of thought narratives:


At the Park
By Laura Cole, age 6

At the park I play and play
Mom says ‘we will have our picnic now’
I have grape juice
My mother brought chips and salsa
I say ‘that is what I want’
She says ‘you can’t just have that’
I have a peanut butter and jelly sandwich
mmmmmmm

I have a Laffy Taffy treat
I go play on the monkey bars
I climb up on top
I say ‘yipee’

I say to Mom ‘can we go home now’
She says ‘yes’
We go home

I say to mom ‘I’ll just have a little dinner’
I go to bed
I forgot to brush my teeth
I get out of bed and brush my teeth
I go to Mom and say
‘I had a good time at the park’






Lily, 8, has written poems that attempted to mimic the descriptive nature of what we were reading:

The Sun
By Lily Cole, age 8

The sun, gold in the day;
The moon, silver in the night;
The stars twinkle like a dozen little jewels
and they all get together and make day and night.












Annie, 4 has written, well, dictated to me, the most rambling, random, funny 'poems':

Drops and Roses
By Annie Rose, age 4

Drops and roses
smell good
I love when it snows
I like when I eat the
ice off our car

I love flowers that are
pink and purple
Elves are so funny
I love the video*
pine cones and skittles,
M&M’s have chocolate in them
 
I love honey
roses and foxgloves and bluebonnets,
pen sharpeners and everything pretty
I love Mommy and I have love in my heart
and love inside my body.
* I am assuming she is referring to the movie 'Elf, one of our favorites!


Matthew, who is a very mature 9, wrote about things that are concrete and real and tried to make a point:

The Sun
By Matthew Cole, age 9

It’s destructive solar rays
could blast us out of existence
if they reached us.

If it came an inch closer
we would explode;
an inch away and
we would freeze.

The sun, a blazing juggernaut
The sun, a curse and a gift.

I plan to make a handmade poetry book of their poems, combining photos with each poem. It is a project I will work on slowly over the summer. I think the kids will like having a finished copy of their work in hand, they may feel like they have been 'published'!

I know poetry sounds like something from the dark ages of high school memories, but really if you give it a try there are some great poets and poems available; and kids that are exposed early to poetry don't know it is not cool to read poetry and will have their perspective enriched!!!

Reading poetry together is like sharing the secrets of the universe!

If you have any poetry books that you have found are great for kids, please let me know. I need something new for next year.

14 comments:

  1. mmmmmm to this post!
    i have love in my belly
    just reading all of it!
    i'm about
    to fall over
    from that photo of lily/
    gorgeous!
    shona, i love
    EVERY poem.
    inspiring.
    way to facilitate
    & record
    your children's beauty/
    the sun in them
    & shining it out
    to all of us.
    xoxox

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  2. I loved all of the children's poems. They were so sweet. Before I read your whole post, I thought that the one by Lily was written by you. Matthew's made me laugh. That's a boy for ya. Thanks for the encouragement to read poetry to our children. It's a good reminder. I am amazed at how much they have accomplished in the course of a year.

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  3. these are such fun to see and read .. such growing taking place under your roof..

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  4. Thank you for sharing this! I also like A Child's Introductin to Poetry by Michael Driscoll and A Child's Book of Poems by Gyo Fujikawa (beautiful pictures.) My kids are all writers too, and I love the idea you have to make them each a book of their own. I hope you will share your process as you create yours.

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  5. Wonderful post! I love writing down my daughter's descriptions of her paintings (the wonderful, rambling, chain of non sequiturs) and have had on my "to do" list an altered story book of her stories ... but I like the idea of writing poems together. I love how each of your children's pieces captures their personality. Poems with artwork - great project for the summer!

    Looking forward to seeing how your project progresses. I am up to the altered storybook project and excited to dive in! As always, I am so grateful for the huge doses of inspiration here :)

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  6. Hi Shona!
    Loving the kids' writing!
    I have a recommendation... It's not a book, but it does contain some really nice poetry and songs for kids: it's a CD called Family Time, by Ziggy Marley. You can find it on Amazon (or I could just lend it to you to copy when you're over!). My kids love it!
    Vx

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  7. Anonymous11:37 AM

    ah, poetry...a beloved art ...something aspire toward and get lost inside...but a month ago at our library's book sale I acquired for $2.50...a 1936 edition of "An Anthology of World Poetry" how fun will this be as summer breezes wash over all of me!!!

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  8. Shona, your children have amazing talent just like you!

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  9. thanks for the idea of reading and sharing poems, I will try it at home too.

    My son's teacher is a professional story-teller too and it has inspired my son no end to 'write' and 'tell' stories, so fab!

    Amelia.x

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  10. I love this post!! We were working on limericks today...I'll have to share these with my crew - they're awesome! And of course they must be published so they can be just like their mom and dad. Miss all of you Cole people. Hugs.

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  11. wowsers girl...these are so darn cute...wish i had kept all my poems i wrote when i was little...i had a book but threw them out in a teen clean out one day...sad sad...
    love each of these...just perfect little pieces that show the individualities of your kidlets...well done to you and them....
    may post my little mans poem on my blog...you've given me inspiration to get them all writing now...xxx

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  12. I just found your blog and I am in love with it...very inspiring. I will be sure to follow you daily. Have a blessed day.

    P.S.
    Your children are adorable.

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  13. Is there any chance you'll write a book or post a more detailed account of how you are homeschooling & instilling creativity in your children? I'd really love to know more about your lesson plans or just how you go about helping your children develop their creativity. I have a 5 month old and I know I want to homeschool her & need to create an environment of inspiration to support her creative spirit but I'm a bit lost at where and how to begin. Any direction you could give would be so so helpful!!!

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  14. I'm so excited to see this post. We are avid poetry readers in my home so we have a lot of kids' poetry books (including this one you wrote about, a big hit with my kids, as well). But we have not tried our hand at producing our own! This is something I'm going to get started on right away. It's such a beautiful idea and I thank you for sharing your kids' wonderful poems. My kids are only three and five years old, but I believe, like you, that it's never too early to start.

    My kids are currently loving Jack Prelutsky's "My Parents Think I'm Sleeping" and my current favorite is Caroline Kennedy's "A Family of Poems," which features beautiful artwork by Jon Muth.

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